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willman30

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Hello Everyone,

I decided to start the thread solely dedicated to poetry and song. I love writring my thoughts with others in the form of poetry and lyrics.
I would love for the models as well as the members and staff to be apart of this. I have noticed that the models are full of passion and the members are very creative!

I guess I'll start us off.

I was going to give this a title but just to make it fun let's see if you can guess the title!


Boundaries between us pushing over the edge.
Kissing, caressing, twisting intertwinded.
Becoming one both body and mind.
New sensations making the nerve endings overload.
Bringing out primal sounds as both bodies tighten in anticipation.
Only to hear you call my name as I awaken.
 
Very nice William; you do have a gift for writing...and arousing our senses. As for a title, I would say:
"Us," "Sensations," or "Eruptions."
 
I was going to give this a title but just to make it fun let's see if you can guess the title!


Boundaries between us pushing over the edge.
Kissing, caressing, twisting intertwinded.
Becoming one both body and mind.
New sensations making the nerve endings overload.
Bringing out primal sounds as both bodies tighten in anticipation.
Only to hear you call my name as I awaken.

I like it Will. It seems very apropos to the 1000th scene we've just watched. Well done! :)
 
Beth;138662. said:
Very nice William; you do have a gift for writing...and arousing our senses. As for a title, I would say:
"Us," "Sensations," or "Eruptions."

Why thank you Beth I do my best. Hehehe.... oh man I really do like those titles mind if I use them some other time?
 
I like it Will. It seems very apropos to the 1000th scene we've just watched. Well done! :)

I agree parts of it was inspired by the 1000th scene. Thanks! I was thinking of posting ounce a week.
 
Her's one from early adolescence:

Roses are
violets are blue
I like peanut butter
Let's fuck!
 
Why thank you Beth I do my best. Hehehe.... oh man I really do like those titles mind if I use them some other time?

Help yourself! Do you write professionally? A mind like yours should not go to waste; just sayin'.
 
Help yourself! Do you write professionally? A mind like yours should not go to waste; just sayin'.



Thanks! the closest I've come is posting online. thought about it. But never actively pursued it. I love writing but I did not want to be tied down to a deadline.
 
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There is a light at the end of my room
Which is annoying the fuck out of me.
So I'm gonna take a shuttle to the moon
And blow the fucking thing out with my pee...
 
Jon that's too funny!

Thanks 30 - I just made it up. I'll make another one up now..

I'm sat in my bed it's quarter past eleven.
My laptop on my chest as I look to the heavens.
My dick is soft cos I've drunk too much wine.
But I know it'll be hard in 8 hours time.

"I'm signing this borrowed tune, that I took from the Rolling Stones.
Alone in this empty room, too wasted to write my own" Neil Young.
 
Hello Everyone,

I decided to start the thread solely dedicated to poetry and song. I love writring my thoughts with others in the form of poetry and lyrics.
I would love for the models as well as the members and staff to be apart of this. I have noticed that the models are full of passion and the members are very creative!


I guess I'll start us off.

I was going to give this a title but just to make it fun let's see if you can guess the title!


Boundaries between us pushing over the edge.
Kissing, caressing, twisting intertwinded.
Becoming one both body and mind.
New sensations making the nerve endings overload.
Bringing out primal sounds as both bodies tighten in anticipation.
Only to hear you call my name as I awaken.

Very nice William. Think you should post more. Wish I had such talent. Love the word Boundaries. There are so many.
Thank You.....
johnny
 
I figured that I would get everyone's blood pumping.

Blindfolded

Darkness encompasses my vision as the soft silk covers my eyes.
The unknown causing temperature to raise.
The heat of hands hovering over the body, barely touching skin.
With darkness awakening sensations never before known.
Heightened awareness opens the door to surrender.
Trust and my body is all I can render.
Giving over to passions flow.
As climax comes I let go.
 
Nice Will! In this case the fewer words used, the better. The readers can then imagine the sensations, emotions, etc., and then fill in the blanks themselves. :)
 
I figured that I would get everyone's blood pumping.

Blindfolded

Darkness encompasses my vision as the soft silk covers my eyes.
The unknown causing temperature to raise.
The heat of hands hovering over the body, barely touching skin.
With darkness awakening sensations never before known.
Heightened awareness opens the door to surrender.
Trust and my body is all I can render.
Giving over to passions flow.
As climax comes I let go.

Very erotic; you talking from personal experience here?!:drool:
 
Nice Will! In this case the fewer words used, the better. The readers can then imagine the sensations, emotions, etc., and then fill in the blanks themselves. :)

Thanks Tampa. I love being able to use constructive criticism
 
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