poetry ive wrote

[danleeh1984]

More of my poetry: The awoken heart

your hearts been broken and
has took time to mend
the sadness you've felt
would never end

tears have rested upon
your cheek when times
have been so very bleak

but the time has now come
for your eyes to open
as love has now come and
your heart has awoken.

The man that stands before
you now whose love is so
strong you wonder how,
but look into his eyes and
see the love he offers for eternity.

His love is so strong it’s easy
to see, it’s not just you
he loves but your entire family.

So the sun has now shone
upon your life, as the man
you love has asked you
to be his wife.

So hand in hand you now
walk along, the bond you
share so very strong.

So now look to the future
and you will see,
a place for him in our
family.

 

[danleeh1984]

I wrote this when I was younger its called the endless struggle:

I feel so low and need to cry,
scared and afraid and I don’t know why,
I hide away alone in my room
hoping those feelings will go away soon.

The day's are the hardest
then the nights draw near,
where the sadness grows and
brings on the fear.

I close my eyes and fight back the tears
looking for the light that I so hope is near,
but then comes the dreams of horror and fright
that carry on all through the night.

Then the mornings come and I do awake
wondering how much more I can take,
but a brave face I must show
as it seems to me no one wants to know.

So here I am putting on this farce
wondering how long it will last,
so on goes my daily fight
hoping I can get through another day another night.

 

[mikeyank]

Thank you Dan. I do not typically read poetry, but knowing you through this forum, I feel a personal connection to you and your life, and I thank you for sharing such personal inner thoughts expressed so beautifully. You are a beautiful person Dan. Thank you for being a member of my "other" family, the forum family. I consider it is a blessing having you here sharing your thoughts with us on a daily basis.

I'm really glad you decided to post those poems. Thank you.

 

[johnny]

Damn I leave the forum for a short while to watch some porn.And come back and everything has changed.
Beautiful Dan.You write Beautiful.I wish I could carry you away and ease some of your pain.
I wish my simple brain could express how much I admire you.But I don't have your talent for words.
You write Beautiful.You have a beautiful heart and soul.And your a fucking nice,sweet,man.
You are Loved and liked.I am so grateful to have you as a friend.
Love,Hugs,Kisses to you. And your little Dog to.
johnny.....

 

[danleeh1984]

Thank you, the only way I can ever express my pain, loneliness etc is to put it into words as to me it feels like I've shared with someone, I guess you could say its like I was talking to a councillor but as you all know my brains not normal like everybody else's so I put in the forum of poetry to make sense of it. That's why the only happy poem I have ever written is what a friend of a relative asked me to write for her as she is a teacher and wanted to share it with her students at primary school, I'll share that one with you at Christmas as I had to write it about Santa etc as that's the only thing I could use at the time. Once again thank you. Dan (x)

 

[peterh6308]

Dan thank you for sharing your most personal poems with us, they were just beautiful! Thanks Ambi for your addition. As always a well written post from you.

 

[Beth]

Dan, you are truly talented; thank you for sharing yourself with us. I really do hope one day you are able to find someone who knows you fully and appreciates everything about you.

 

[tampa24]

Thank you Dan for sharing all those beautiful poems with us.

 

[PascalBrutal]

Your poems always make me cry for some reason. Are you going to post more?

 

[danleeh1984]

Thank you, I'm not sure when but eventually I will. The ones I haven't published are because they are way to raw and I dont want people to realise how low and lonely I get and as all of my emotions go in to my poems if I published them I would feel to exposed as it took alot to publish the ones I have as normally people who know about my emotions and how I feel run and haven't wanted to know me but I guess that's as I've never really had a proper friend and now ever since I become disabled I have no physical friends as they all deserted me when they found out I couldn't go out anymore. Thank you. Dan x

 

[Beth]

Thank you, I'm not sure when but eventually I will. The ones I haven't published are because they are way to raw and I dont want people to realise how low and lonely I get and as all of my emotions go in to my poems if I published them I would feel to exposed as it took alot to publish the ones I have as normally people who know about my emotions and how I feel run and haven't wanted to know me but I guess that's as I've never really had a proper friend and now ever since I become disabled I have no physical friends as they all deserted me when they found out I couldn't go out anymore. Thank you. Dan x

Okay Dan, first off, you've got us, and we're a pretty diverse group. We like your poems so, you've definitely got something "in you" that we like. You can take that energy and channel it to find other friends who, like us, take you as you are; no biggie. Life is not what happens to you, but how you react to what happens to you. Much love!

 

[danleeh1984]

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Okay Dan, first off, you've got us, and we're a pretty diverse group. We like your poems so, you've definitely got something "in you" that we like. You can take that energy and channel it to find other friends who, like us, take you as you are; no biggie. Life is not what happens to you, but how you react to what happens to you. Much love!

thank you I didn't mean to go on a feel sorry for me moment then I guess I'm just having one of those days, sorry. X

 

[danleeh1984]

I'll post this last poem for now, I wrote it for my brother when he married someone who id become friends with, he didn't want it so ill share it with you.

My brother and friend have
finally seen that there
love is stronger than
it has ever been.

They have both had their
troubles, sorrows and tears
but together they have fought
through there fears.

But the time has now come
and they have come to know
the love for each other
that the other shows.

So now that their fears
are over and done
finally there hearts can beat as one.

So there life together can
now begin, there old troubles
and woes a distant din.

So now hand in hand
they can walk along
there love for each other eternally strong.