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Max's grand adventures

This happened last year in a student apartment that my friend Rob is going to let out next year. We've met there twice and are going back for the weekend on the 21st of this month :love:

There was more talking but I can't really remember, I just remember and tried to put across how I felt, hopefully when I write the rest I'll try to get across K and Rob's motivation and how they are feeling more, but if there are any thoughts or advice please let me know.

That was a hot story Max!! Please please please keep sharing!
 
Why not post on a gay story site. You could end up earning money.
i'm still learning - i'd love to write everything i've done and have as many people as possible know about it. it's hard though, it would be easier to make stuff up but my motivation is that its authentic. i get a massive thrill out of confessing this stuff, both as i'm writing and as people read.

But i think i will eventually for sure, although i can't see me earning cash tbh x
 
What can I say Max? I’ve just spent the last thirty minutes or more, reading and “fiddling” with myself reading your amazing three part description of your incredible encounter with Rob & Kieran in that apartment with the open shades overlooking Sheffield, England.

You are an amazing writer, painting such a clear and concise word picture, as I felt like a voyeur sitting in a chair in a dark corner of the room, taking in all the sights, sounds and even smells of three virile young men in their primal sexual peak. I can picture each of your bodies as if I were watching it all unfold. You are a magnificent writer.

Thank you for sharing the erotic details of your encounter as well as your incredible writing talent with us here. You are an incredibly talented young man, both in your prose and your drawing ability as well, as you’ve shared that with us previously. I can’t thank you enough for sharing this all with us here on the forum. By the way Max, you have an incredible future in whatever direction you decide to showcase your talents in the future. Thank you so very much for sharing this all with us here.
Thanks :love: :love: :love:

It prolly turns me on ten times more writing this stuff than anybody who is reading.

I've been trying to place you there by describing senses to make it more real for sure, i'm still learning. I said in a post above that it's hard writing about real stuff, but it's easier to talk about the senses because I can actually remember. Smelling Rob's aftershave was such a turn on at the time, i love this when I'm with a man, it reminds me they are the boss for some reason - i don't know why, i just associate aftershave with a dominant male figure.

cheers x
 
i'm still learning - i'd love to write everything i've done and have as many people as possible know about it. it's hard though, it would be easier to make stuff up but my motivation is that its authentic. i get a massive thrill out of confessing this stuff, both as i'm writing and as people read.

But i think i will eventually for sure, although i can't see me earning cash tbh x
You might be surprised how much your gift elevated others. As to writing fiction, you weave in your experiences with the character who become real to you and your readers & take on a life of their own. They become your babies.
 
2/3

The beginning of what sounded like it would be a boring conversation about cars was my trigger for action. I pushed off my crocs and stood up.

I wear loose joggers most of the time – no underwear obviously – I can pull these off, my jersey goes flying and in under three seconds I’m naked and they’re staring at my boner.

There was a seconds hesitation before they were both scrambling with their clothes, neither taking their eyes from my body. From the smooth luxury of my skin. The hardness of my nipples. The proud curve of my penis.

The thud thud of footwear hitting carpet is replaced by the jangle of belt buckles.

“No, leave them open,” I said as Rob went to close the blinds. From the look on his face I must have sounded bitchy, but I didn’t care. I was pent up. “I want you to share me right here, in front of the world.”

Looking at me half like I was a silly little boy, half like a juicy steak, Rob dimmed the lights. “We’ll just turn these down a bit.” He was unbuttoning his shirt.

Kieran was nude faster and leaned back on the couch, glancing up furtively as if for approval. I knew Rob would be loving what he saw – a long limbed, slim, smooth twink with pubic hair almost all shaved off, just leaving a small, short, thick patch above a threateningly beautiful, large, semi-erect teenage penis.

I knelt between Kieran’s legs, as I had a hundred times before, looking into his eyes as I placed his glory into my wet mouth.

Sucking like a lollipop I can feel blood rushing to engorge the dick in my mouth, feel the growth, sense his breathing change. My hands travel the length of his bare thighs as I go to work.

I hear the noise of increasingly wet kisses; I look up to find Rob kissing my boyfriend – passionately. Fervently. And the feeling is clearly mutual! They’re feasting on each other’s lips as I watch. The thrill of seeing them sends a jolt through my naked body. I tense my dick, surprised at how hard sharing Kieran has made me down there, how good it made me feel that he appeared to be enjoying Rob’s tongue in his mouth.

I release Kieran's hard, wet dick, letting it slap onto his taut belly before running my tongue up the underside.

“Fucking hell,” Rob says, breaking off his kissing. I grin proudly, licking the shaft so he can keep looking at it – Kieran is more than 7 inches, thick with a slight bend, and a wide, wedge shaped head. I knew Rob would be amazed.

“Taste it,” I suggest, kissing my way down to Kieran's balls. I can feel the scrape of tiny, shaven hairs as I run my tongue around them. Rob bends to suck on the end of his dick in twisting motions.

Our victim is squirming, hands on his face and breathing hard as we pleasure different parts of his privates, enjoying it as much as him. Rob’s blow job is getting sloppier and sloppier. Bubbly spit runs down into the smooth crevice between Kieran's junk and leg – I scoop it up with my tongue and swallow.

We’re all moaning like pornstars – I need to taste Kieran’s lips so hop up. We make out, getting carried away. I feel fingers on my smooth balls, my heavy dick, panting as Rob starts masturbating both of us.

“I wanna suck you,” escapes between ragged breaths from between my lips. Soon we’re contorted on the sofa, the three of us, writhing, twisted and naked as we enjoy each other. I’ve got Rob almost to the back of my throat while Kieran is on his back fellating me. One of them has fingers exploring my bumhole, there are more fingers on a thigh, more tweaking a nipple.

We’re all whispering ecstasy, all sampling each other’s tangled bodies with our hands and mouths until Rob stops abruptly, pushing me away – things must have been happening with him.

A hand underneath my armpit is guiding me, positioning me to kneel looking over the back of the sofa out of the window, vulnerable. Hands are all over me. Oily fingers touch me right there.

I look out through the windows into the night sky as I wait, masturbating myself with one hand as I arch my back to stick my bum out. A firework pops somewhere over Sheffield.

“Wow. I’ve missed that,” Rob gives me a squeeze on my butt. “This is cool isn’t it?”

“We got a deal though, right?” Kieran replied carefully.

“Yeah, promise.”

“Sure.”

I love the deal they made, but not as much as I love the instant, shocking feeling of Rob’s stubble in between my ass cheeks, in the centre of my attraction. Cold hands prise me apart to access my boyhood.

His tongue feels warm and wet, teasing me up and down, sampling me, seducing me. Why does it feel this good?! I have to stop touching myself and grab onto the back of the sofa, holding on tight.

I feel kissing and nibbling around the pointed angle of my bum, and squeezing. Suddenly I am penetrated, and again – by slick fingers. I’m a quivering wreck, goosebumps spring up everywhere as this married man makes a meal of my behind.

“Fuck me!” I look back. I’ve been waiting too long.

Rob stands up. I feel his hands on my hips, the weight of his cock on my ass, in the crease. I know he’s not as thick as me, or as long as Kieran, but he always felt good. There is a moment of stillness.

I feel it at my gate, about to batter through. It is pressing carefully, firmly, forcing my defences apart, a gradual encroachment – about to conquer but I’ve already surrendered.

I gasp, feeling my hole pierced by the top of Rob’s cock. “Jesus yes!”

He keeps pressing forwards and advances a couple of inches until my body resists, revolting against the invasion. I grunt something animalistic – I’ve no idea what, perhaps it was just the sound of pain, relief, shame and exhilaration. The muscles of my hole grip Rob tight. He impales me to the hilt.

“Ohhhh Jesus. That’s sweeeet!” I moan. I’ve grown used to Kieran’s cock – it’s amazing, bigger, better, but he’s too careful to start with! Rob knows I don’t need mercy. Or perhaps he doesn’t care – please God let him not care! He’s only been inside me for seconds but he’s fucking me all the way. I have no time to adapt. He plunges recklessly into me.

I can’t catch my breath.

He pulls me backwards by my hair. I’ll never cut my hair, it belong in men’s clenched fists, and Rob uses it to pull my head towards him until I feel his breath on my ear.

Between breaths he whispers; “You like that don’t you Max?”

“Jesus yes. Arrrggggh! Treat me like a slut.”

Continued...
We're goin back tonight :eek: :eek: :eek:
 
Thanks :love: :love: :love:

It prolly turns me on ten times more writing this stuff than anybody who is reading.

I've been trying to place you there by describing senses to make it more real for sure, i'm still learning. I said in a post above that it's hard writing about real stuff, but it's easier to talk about the senses because I can actually remember. Smelling Rob's aftershave was such a turn on at the time, i love this when I'm with a man, it reminds me they are the boss for some reason - i don't know why, i just associate aftershave with a dominant male figure.

cheers x
You are a gifted artist.
 
OK so a little update, but not written properly or edited.

Has been a weird week or so. My last story was about K and Rob, and what we did before xmas. We've met a few times since I came back to Shef since xmas. The apartment Rob has is a purpose built student accommodation with 6 or so bedrooms, I've enjoyed making sure I have been railed in every room.

I just like the thought of the lads that are gonna sleep on those mattresses, after i've been had on them.

Rob told me that he and Kieran had met a few times when I was back in Bath over xmas. By the time I saw K he knew Rob had told me and apologised; I told him he didn't have to. I've been a little confused how I feel - I probably should be angry and get rid of them both, but that's not how I feel. When I spoke to K about it I almost wanted him to be more belligerent and put me in my place. I'm feeling more and more like I need to be dominated and dictated to and don't think this is Kieran's thing.

I called Wei (I've written about him before) and met him tonight (thursday) and we did stuff - but he mostly wanted me to fuck him. He did penetrate me but not much happened. I did a good shift in him and I'm pretty sure he's mine, but I want to be somebody's, not the other way around.

I don't know if I'm feeling a little jealous with Rob and K. I get to feeling Rob likes him more than me. I know Rob fucked him, and he doesn't let me do that. He has a nice bum I can see why Rob is into him. I dunno. I'm prolly wrong, they both go to town on me a lot.

I'm almost tempted to go my own way - I know people who would take me. Take me. The guys I lost my V to would love me back, but he's not a nice guy. But I'm still laid in bed thinking about the stuff they did to me. The lads I see now are a lot nicer to me, but I don't know that's what I want sensually.

Anyway that's my jumbled update lol. Have had a drink again but not too drunk. Prolly cringing in the morning as I've cheated on K with Wei - sorry for sounding flippant about that, it's not good.

Edit after reading back; i'm not going back to people who mistreat me - Kieran and Rob, and Wei are so nice to me. I've got a chilli in the fridge rob's wife Rachel has cooked for me - that's how cool they all are, I'm fucking her husband and she's cooking for me - it's mental I'm thinking of bunking them all off. Writing this has helped me think straighter. Just wish I could have both things.
 
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OK so a little update, but not written properly or edited.

Has been a weird week or so. My last story was about K and Rob, and what we did before xmas. We've met a few times since I came back to Shef since xmas. The apartment Rob has is a purpose built student accommodation with 6 or so bedrooms, I've enjoyed making sure I have been railed in every room.

I just like the thought of the lads that are gonna sleep on those mattresses, after i've been had on them.

Rob told me that he and Kieran had met a few times when I was back in Bath over xmas. By the time I saw K he knew Rob had told me and apologised; I told him he didn't have to. I've been a little confused how I feel - I probably should be angry and get rid of them both, but that's not how I feel. When I spoke to K about it I almost wanted him to be more belligerent and put me in my place. I'm feeling more and more like I need to be dominated and dictated to and don't think this is Kieran's thing.

I called Wei (I've written about him before) and met him tonight (thursday) and we did stuff - but he mostly wanted me to fuck him. He did penetrate me but not much happened. I did a good shift in him and I'm pretty sure he's mine, but I want to be somebody's, not the other way around.

I don't know if I'm feeling a little jealous with Rob and K. I get to feeling Rob likes him more than me. I know Rob fucked him, and he doesn't let me do that. He has a nice bum I can see why Rob is into him. I dunno. I'm prolly wrong, they both go to town on me a lot.

I'm almost tempted to go my own way - I know people who would take me. Take me. The guys I lost my V to would love me back, but he's not a nice guy. But I'm still laid in bed thinking about the stuff they did to me. The lads I see now are a lot nicer to me, but I don't know that's what I want sensually.

Anyway that's my jumbled update lol. Have had a drink again but not too drunk. Prolly cringing in the morning as I've cheated on K with Wei - sorry for sounding flippant about that, it's not good.

Edit after reading back; i'm not going back to people who mistreat me - Kieran and Rob, and Wei are so nice to me. I've got a chilli in the fridge rob's wife Rachel has cooked for me - that's how cool they all are, I'm fucking her husband and she's cooking for me - it's mental I'm thinking of bunking them all off. Writing this has helped me think straighter. Just wish I could have both things.
You gotta do what you got to do! Thanks for the update.
 
OK so a little update, but not written properly or edited.

Has been a weird week or so. My last story was about K and Rob, and what we did before xmas. We've met a few times since I came back to Shef since xmas. The apartment Rob has is a purpose built student accommodation with 6 or so bedrooms, I've enjoyed making sure I have been railed in every room.

I just like the thought of the lads that are gonna sleep on those mattresses, after i've been had on them.

Rob told me that he and Kieran had met a few times when I was back in Bath over xmas. By the time I saw K he knew Rob had told me and apologised; I told him he didn't have to. I've been a little confused how I feel - I probably should be angry and get rid of them both, but that's not how I feel. When I spoke to K about it I almost wanted him to be more belligerent and put me in my place. I'm feeling more and more like I need to be dominated and dictated to and don't think this is Kieran's thing.

I called Wei (I've written about him before) and met him tonight (thursday) and we did stuff - but he mostly wanted me to fuck him. He did penetrate me but not much happened. I did a good shift in him and I'm pretty sure he's mine, but I want to be somebody's, not the other way around.

I don't know if I'm feeling a little jealous with Rob and K. I get to feeling Rob likes him more than me. I know Rob fucked him, and he doesn't let me do that. He has a nice bum I can see why Rob is into him. I dunno. I'm prolly wrong, they both go to town on me a lot.

I'm almost tempted to go my own way - I know people who would take me. Take me. The guys I lost my V to would love me back, but he's not a nice guy. But I'm still laid in bed thinking about the stuff they did to me. The lads I see now are a lot nicer to me, but I don't know that's what I want sensually.

Anyway that's my jumbled update lol. Have had a drink again but not too drunk. Prolly cringing in the morning as I've cheated on K with Wei - sorry for sounding flippant about that, it's not good.

Edit after reading back; i'm not going back to people who mistreat me - Kieran and Rob, and Wei are so nice to me. I've got a chilli in the fridge rob's wife Rachel has cooked for me - that's how cool they all are, I'm fucking her husband and she's cooking for me - it's mental I'm thinking of bunking them all off. Writing this has helped me think straighter. Just wish I could have both things.

Max, it is so cool that you share your intimate experiences and more importantly your thoughts here. Your honesty is refreshing. I can see your conundrum of wanting to be with people who are nice to you, yet you sexually desire to be dominated, and the nice guys you know and are with, do not seem to have that aspect to their sexual personas when with you.

The good news is that you are young and have time to figure it all out. Being at university surrounded by a whole community of guys as well as women, but my advice is to just keep living life, meeting people, and discovering exactly who you are and exactly who you want to be with.

I sure hope you continue talking to us here, despite the fact that the forum has shrunk to a very small number of active members for you to interact with, but I love reading everything you have to tell us. Thanks for sharing and just being you. :angel:
 
Max, it is so cool that you share your intimate experiences and more importantly your thoughts here. Your honesty is refreshing. I can see your conundrum of wanting to be with people who are nice to you, yet you sexually desire to be dominated, and the nice guys you know and are with, do not seem to have that aspect to their sexual personas when with you.

The good news is that you are young and have time to figure it all out. Being at university surrounded by a whole community of guys as well as women, but my advice is to just keep living life, meeting people, and discovering exactly who you are and exactly who you want to be with.

I sure hope you continue talking to us here, despite the fact that the forum has shrunk to a very small number of active members for you to interact with, but I love reading everything you have to tell us. Thanks for sharing and just being you. :angel:
Think you're right Mike, I would definitely like the best of both worlds.

I'm not getting any younger, I was 22 yesterday. I had a good day, but tonight I'm off out in the bar with a few mates, will try to have an even better time.
 
Think you're right Mike, I would definitely like the best of both worlds.

I'm not getting any younger, I was 22 yesterday. I had a good day, but tonight I'm off out in the bar with a few mates, will try to have an even better time.
:birthday: Max. You are getting old, 22. Do they have AARP in Great Britain? :lol:

I‘m obviously joking young man. You are still coming into your prime, or is that “cumming”? Have a fabulous time with your mates tonight. You are so sweet for being such an open and fun guy! Party hearty! :par50:
 
22 , ha ha . You know when I was in the peak of my physical shape , believe it or not at 52. And han I not been struck by cancer it might have gone longer. Granted to be that fit takes work, good genes & a healthy diet but you need not be extreme as I was(my character I alway tends to go overboard) but do the physical conditioning and diet in moderation and you can double or triple the 22 and be at or near your peak.
 
Think you're right Mike, I would definitely like the best of both worlds.

I'm not getting any younger, I was 22 yesterday. I had a good day, but tonight I'm off out in the bar with a few mates, will try to have an even better time.

Well Happy belated birthday!!!! 🥳🧁
 
:birthday: Max. You are getting old, 22. Do they have AARP in Great Britain? :lol:

I‘m obviously joking young man. You are still coming into your prime, or is that “cumming”? Have a fabulous time with your mates tonight. You are so sweet for being such an open and fun guy! Party hearty! :par50:
I didn't know what aarp was sorry lol. Thanks.
 
22 , ha ha . You know when I was in the peak of my physical shape , believe it or not at 52. And han I not been struck by cancer it might have gone longer. Granted to be that fit takes work, good genes & a healthy diet but you need not be extreme as I was(my character I alway tends to go overboard) but do the physical conditioning and diet in moderation and you can double or triple the 22 and be at or near your peak.
Sorry you had to go through that; I hope you're better.

I run to stay in shape, don't want to do weights to put too much bulk on, that's not me, but imagine I'll keep this up. I'm a little better with the 'in moderation' stuff than I have been. Hope to keep going a while yet.
 
Sorry you had to go through that; I hope you're better.

I run to stay in shape, don't want to do weights to put too much bulk on, that's not me, but imagine I'll keep this up. I'm a little better with the 'in moderation' stuff than I have been. Hope to keep going a while yet.
I survived & with a 98% fatality rate at the time that was a miracle, so being alive yes but being what I was no. As to your regime, I too, did little with weights & mostly aerobics which when I did house cleaning left me fresh after a day's work when others were dropping & I remained very thin. So as far as I am concerned you got the right regime.
 
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