Latest Scene Narrative: Jimmy, Rocco, Slink

[tampa24]

I wanted to talk about the written narratives of the new scenes. Broke Straight Boys has improved them greatly over the last 2 years. Gone are the days when typos, misspelled words and mangled grammar were common. The narratives have improved tremendously. Thank you. And keep up the good work.

I was all prepard to talk about how paragraphs are our friends. lol Because the first day the latest scene came out the narative was all bunched up together in a pile. This makes it very hard to read from a computer screen if you have to struggle to find the beginning of the next line of text. But lo and behold before I even had the chance to ask them to, they had already fixed it. Thanks guys...(And gals?)

I know that with different personalities running things that the tone and realtionship between producton staff and models will be different. That's totally understandable and not at all unwelcome. Change can be good. I must say though that some of the tone coming out at the very beginning is worrying me. Because it leads you to wonder where the new path is heading.

If the new vision is to bring in common street hustlers who are just moderately attractive I don't think that would go over well. For the epitome of that genre you'd have to go to that cesspool ASG site. Yuk. I'm not saying that I think this is where Broke Straight Boys is going. I know the staff here is too smart for that.

I know that with this being porn you can't sell an idyllic vision of Broke Straight Boys land being some Shangri La....where production staff and models are all wrapped up in Kumbaya hugs and a total lovefest. Some straight models are going to be a pain in the ass to work with. Figuratively... lol But if we want to attrract good looking, self respecting, straight models who are 8's, 9's and 10's to apply to the site...and I think we do...then we need to do better than the last narrative.

What classy self respecting guy wants to apply and work on a site that in its advertising refers to its own models with contempt?

"The boys did good, and some boundaries were pushed, so I'm hoping that after these lazy fucks blow through their money they will come around for some more."

Really?? I think we can do better than that.

 

[cumrag27]

Thank you Tampa!

I wanted to talk about the written narratives of the new scenes. Broke Straight Boys has improved them greatly over the last 2 years. Gone are the days when typos, misspelled words and mangled grammar were common. The narratives have improved tremendously. Thank you. And keep up the good work.

I was all prepard to talk about how paragraphs are our friends. lol Because the first day the latest scene came out the narative was all bunched up together in a pile. This makes it very hard to read from a computer screen if you have to struggle to find the beginning of the next line of text. But lo and behold before I even had the chance to ask them to, they had already fixed it. Thanks guys...(And gals?)

I know that with different personalities running things that the tone and realtionship between producton staff and models will be different. That's totally understandable and not at all unwelcome. Change can be good. I must say though that some of the tone coming out at the very beginning is worrying me. Because it leads you to wonder where the new path is heading.

If the new vision is to bring in common street hustlers who are just moderately attractive I don't think that would go over well. For the epitome of that genre you'd have to go to that cesspool ASG site. Yuk. I'm not saying that I think this is where Broke Straight Boys is going. I know the staff here is too smart for that.

I know that with this being porn you can't sell an idyllic vision of Broke Straight Boys land being some Shangri La....where production staff and models are all wrapped up in Kumbaya hugs and a total lovefest. Some straight models are going to be a pain in the ass to work with. Figuratively... lol But if we want to attrract good looking, self respecting, straight models who are 8's, 9's and 10's to apply to the site...and I think we do...then we need to do better than the last narrative.

What classy self respecting guy wants to apply and work on a site that in its advertising refers to its own models with contempt?

"The boys did good, and some boundaries were pushed, so I'm hoping that after these lazy fucks blow through their money they will come around for some more."

Really?? I think we can do better than that.

Dear Tampa24,

You are so very right. If the bar is set too low from the onset, then that is the level of willing models that will come our way. I don't think most members want that. Thank you for point out this problem Tampa!

Sincerely,


Stimpy

 

[rrhill]

Dear Tampa and Cumrag,

Time will prove or disprove. Are all David's video's a gem? This is the moment of change, no more video's on the shelf that were filmed before last year's month of June.

More than ever before your opinions will be heard. Instead of being a consumer of old stuff, you really could change the future of Broke Straight Boys Please don't be to harsh, judging episode 1 and 2... were you could change the Broke Straight Boys world with your positive criticism!

 

[lubetube]

Very well said.

I too have always wondered why some refuse to use the ENTER key to start a new paragraph. It reminds me of reading those old latin scripts which didn't even have spacing between words.

As for spelling and grammar, nobody's perfect. But there's a satellite site for Broke Straight Boys called GayTube. Among other things, someone there has been using the word "secrete" when writing the narratives for the longest time. It's hysterical.

 

[tampa24]

Dear Tampa and Cumrag,

More than ever before your opinions will be heard. Instead of being a consumer of old stuff, you really could change the future of Broke Straight Boys Please don't be to harsh, judging episode 1 and 2... were you could change the Broke Straight Boys world with your positive criticism!

I totally understand what you're saying my friend. As I mentioned in another thread it's a difficult tightrope to walk. I don't want to hurt feelings. I don't want to be too harsh. But if we members don't give some honest feedback quickly we may miss out on an opportunity to improve things all that much faster. The staff is in only its first week of new content. That's no time at all! So it's far too early for any of us to make judgements on how good the new site will be.

 

[bobsled57]

Let's give the new crew a chance. Not all of David's guys were super fine. These new dudes look like real straight guys you would see hanging out at a
bar. I am excited to see where this goes. Some of the "straight" guys David had were a pair of pumps away from being Ru Paul. Price or Ashton anyone.

 

[Dickles]

OK..so I am starting a new site, taking over a reliable and trusted name. Do I have but one or two videos to offer? That would be sad. I must have a slew of pre-taped episodes ready for my distributor. So, how would I pick which ones to kick off the "new era".? I pray to above that the actual producer/director has decided that chronological order, showing my and the models' mutual development was the way to go.

If this premiere is the "come and see OUR NEW SITE!" choice, selected from multiple available episodes, this site is doomed. I did not want to get to know any of these guys better. I didn't want to hug any of them. I wouldn't want to meet any of them, in any manner, in real life.

The banter reminds me of off-season Sports broadcasts on local news where there is no sports, only business contracts and deals. Hello! We presume they are broke (30 seconds would re-inforce that). David, even though he referred to the "deals" often, took care of the negotiating off-camera, and stuck to a stylistic approach (perhaps suggested by law) which indicated the guys were "willing" for the money.

I do not want lessons on how difficult it is to convince some straight guy to beat off with, suck or fuck another guy. I am not starting my own site...I don't need to learn that. I don't pick up guys on the street...I don't want advice or examples of how to pull that off. And, in my humble opinion, allowing the "talent" to take control of the situation, on camera, does not come across well.

Good luck! I will continue watching to see how this develops!

dickles

 

[juanjo]

If the new vision is to bring in common street hustlers who are just moderately attractive I don't think that would go over well. For the epitome of that genre you'd have to go to that cesspool ASG site. Yuk. I'm not saying that I think this is where Broke Straight Boys is going. I know the staff here is too smart for that.

My personal opinion is that Amateur Straight Guys is not a cesspool of common street hustlers who are only moderately attractive but I do understand that people's tastes vary. But I do not understand your need to denigrate another website to make a point about this one. It shows a distinct lack of class on your part.

I have enjoyed the old format and enjoyed David's work and the models he put on camera. There were a few who were real duds for me but clearly some others liked them because I read comments from people about them saying so. As I said tastes vary.

But the format was getting a bit stale. That may have much more to do with the limitations generated by the types of models being used more than creativity on David's part. I think that given that David from his commentary seemed to be a really cool and decent guy. It was clear he treated the guys well and that they liked him which says a lot. But that futon was getting old and the models seemed to always be doing the same sorts of things. Hopefully the new management will add a bit of variety to the format and few more edgy straight boys would be fun to watch especially if they are having gay sex with each other.

As for common street hustlers, well you might be surprised to know there is considerable variety there as well. I suspect that more than one of the more popular older Broke Straight Boys models may have been a "common street hustler" at some point in his life but I don't really care.