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Twas the night before shooting

Denny Bear

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Ok guys and gals this is my first attempt at poetry so cut me some slack and this is still a rough version but I wanted to get it out while it was still sort of Christmas. Hope you enjoy.

Twas the night before shooting and all through the house not a creature was stirring not even a mouse.
The condoms all stacked neatly on a char, all prepped for the straight boys which soon would be there.
Viagra and lube the camera and lights, both David and Eddie prepared for the sights.
Then Logan, and Tyler, Cj, and Nu, all of the regulars and a few of them new.
Together they huddled while offers were made, all begging and taunting the price to be paid.
It was finally all settled the deals had been made. CJ would bottom while Tyler head gave.
First came the T Shirts then down with their shorts. Soon they were naked with hardons of sorts.
Tyler was first with a dick down his throat, then Nu worked on Logan until he did choke.
The sucking continued till a quarter past three, stopping just once since Nu had to pee.
David kept shooting and Eddie took pictures, Tyler fucked CJ with Logan in stitches.
Nu was all ready for Logan to fuck, but he was still soft so Nu had to suck.
They fucked and they sucked all night until day. The way that they did it you'd think they were gay.
As I watched from the corner I heard them explode, David yelled back it’s really a big load.
Come Logan come CJ, Tyler then Nu. They all came together and did it on queue.
The fucking was over the juices had run. For all that attended had nothing but fun.
For now it’s all ended, the fucking is done. The models have left us they fucked and then run.
The buildings now empty just those two and me. My time there soon ended id seen all I could see
But I heard them explain as I walked slowly away. Broke Straight Boys to all and have a great day.
 
Denny you are truly an amazing man with exceptional tallents. I hope David and Eddy frame that poem for you. That poem was wonderful.:thumbup:
 
Ok guys and gals this is my first attempt at poetry so cut me some slack and this is still a rough version but I wanted to get it out while it was still sort of Christmas. Hope you enjoy.

Twas the night before shooting and all through the house not a creature was stirring not even a mouse.
The condoms all stacked neatly on a char, all prepped for the straight boys which soon would be there.
Viagra and lube the camera and lights, both David and Eddie prepared for the sights.
Then Logan, and Tyler, Cj, and Nu, all of the regulars and a few of them new.
Together they huddled while offers were made, all begging and taunting the price to be paid.
It was finally all settled the deals had been made. CJ would bottom while Tyler head gave.
First came the T Shirts then down with their shorts. Soon they were naked with hardons of sorts.
Tyler was first with a dick down his throat, then Nu worked on Logan until he did choke.
The sucking continued till a quarter past three, stopping just once since Nu had to pee.
David kept shooting and Eddie took pictures, Tyler fucked CJ with Logan in stitches.
Nu was all ready for Logan to fuck, but he was still soft so Nu had to suck.
They fucked and they sucked all night until day. The way that they did it you'd think they were gay.
As I watched from the corner I heard them explode, David yelled back it’s really a big load.
Come Logan come CJ, Tyler then Nu. They all came together and did it on queue.
The fucking was over the juices had run. For all that attended had nothing but fun.
For now it’s all ended, the fucking is done. The models have left us they fucked and then run.
The buildings now empty just those two and me. My time there soon ended id seen all I could see
But I heard them explain as I walked slowly away. Broke Straight Boys to all and have a great day.

First attempt or not, rough version or not - you certainly captured what Broke Straight Boys has been all about.
I loved it, thanks Denny. :thumbup:
 
To Denny Bear......

Denny,

What a wonderful talent and inspiration. You stirred something inside of me and I'm not known for poetry......

So rushing back home did Denny Bear, so that he could strip all that he wear.
Because that beautiful Logan was such a moaner, it gave Denny a great big boner.
With so recent memories of fucking Broke Straight Boys boys, he didn't need any of his regular toys.
So with pants around ankles and a boner in sight, Denny was already dripping that pre cum delight.
With only three strokes he took, he got that pre-ecstasy anguished look.
Because he knew that from deep inside was coming a pleasureable ride.
But before his head swell, he tripped lost balance and fell.
With poor Denny flat on his back, he just had to finish the final act.
So with fat cock head held high, he did shoot warm cum in his eye.
And so with hormones fully spent he could now get dressed and not pitch a tent!


Enjoy the festive season DB,

Undie
 
I am loving it Undie.:wink:
 
glad to see you guys are not just pulling your pud on this site but adding to the great cannon of American literature. Nice work - very cute
 
All is well...

Denny,

What a wonderful talent and inspiration. You stirred something inside of me and I'm not known for poetry......

So rushing back home did Denny Bear, so that he could strip all that he wear.
Because that beautiful Logan was such a moaner, it gave Denny a great big boner.
With so recent memories of fucking Broke Straight Boys boys, he didn't need any of his regular toys.
So with pants around ankles and a boner in sight, Denny was already dripping that pre cum delight.
With only three strokes he took, he got that pre-ecstasy anguished look.
Because he knew that from deep inside was coming a pleasureable ride.
But before his head swell, he tripped lost balance and fell.
With poor Denny flat on his back, he just had to finish the final act.
So with fat cock head held high, he did shoot warm cum in his eye.
And so with hormones fully spent he could now get dressed and not pitch a tent!


Enjoy the festive season DB,

Undie

Dearest Undie-Broke Straight Boys Poet Laureate,

Thank you for your literary eyefull.:confused1: It seems, undie, that Denny, now naked with his pants around his ankles, fully spent after just three short strokes and his boner totally limp and dragging directly in his pathway and at risk of frostbite, could on his own resources limp all the way home with only one seeing eye and an aching back at his advanced age. As his guiding light, he could depend on no lantern, no led lighting fixture since all supplies of batteries have been drained, nor even that trusty, frequently drunk, red-nosed reindeer - Rudolph. All he has, in lew of a GPS device or an iPhone at his command, is only his beaming (removeable) pearly-white smile from ear to ear to light his perilous pathway back to the North Pole (only to be reused and abused again next year). I would like to ask the audience known for their objectivity, do you detect a "Victim" in the making in this literary scenario?

Personally, I would like to suggest that Denny is co-dependant and needs immediately to enroll in a 12-step program by internet or routine enrollment once he safely limps to his safe haven (hopefully arriving frostbite free) at the North Pole. Lets hope for everyone's sake, including and especially undie's, Denny sufficiently heals to make his rounds once again next Dec. 25th, just in time for Jayman's next birthday!:thumbup:

Although this is strictly my personal opinion, this entire "poetic" scenario with Denny comes at great personal costs and seems better suited for an afternoon soap-opera. Having so little prior experience in writing poetry, I would suggest undie needs to relinquish his claim to resident Broke Straight Boys "Poet Laureate" to those more suitably destined to carry this mantle with all the many responsibilities that it implies.:001_wub:

Happy New Year to all, and especially Denny waddling back so slowly to the North Pole,
 
Denny,

What a wonderful talent and inspiration. You stirred something inside of me and I'm not known for poetry......

So rushing back home did Denny Bear, so that he could strip all that he wear.
Because that beautiful Logan was such a moaner, it gave Denny a great big boner.
With so recent memories of fucking Broke Straight Boys boys, he didn't need any of his regular toys.
So with pants around ankles and a boner in sight, Denny was already dripping that pre cum delight.
With only three strokes he took, he got that pre-ecstasy anguished look.
Because he knew that from deep inside was coming a pleasureable ride.
But before his head swell, he tripped lost balance and fell.
With poor Denny flat on his back, he just had to finish the final act.
So with fat cock head held high, he did shoot warm cum in his eye.
And so with hormones fully spent he could now get dressed and not pitch a tent!


Enjoy the festive season DB,

Undie

LOL I Love it LMAO :lol:
 
Denny Bear, you did a great job with the poetry, As a new member to Broke Straight Boys, I enjoyed your work. You are good.
Denny does terrific things for us on the forum. Before they gave us a search engine by model, Denny had provided us with a spread sheet listing every model, and the dates of their scenes. I agree that Denny is wonderful, :thumbup:
 
Nice to know

Denny does terrific things for us on the forum. Before they gave us a search engine by model, Denny had provided us with a spread sheet listing every model, and the dates of their scenes. I agree that Denny is wonderful, :thumbup:

Dear Mikeyank,

Having been a member for 10 months, it is nice to know the contributions other have made on the forum. This is the first I have heard of Denny's prior contributions.

Sincerely,


Cumrag27, aka Stimpy
 
Denny does terrific things for us on the forum. Before they gave us a search engine by model, Denny had provided us with a spread sheet listing every model, and the dates of their scenes. I agree that Denny is wonderful, :thumbup:

My, I feel somewhat over whelmed, I had to look around to see if there was anyone else here by that name. I can not thank you enough Mikeyank for your kind words of support. It is truly a pleasure to know you. :blushing:
 
Denny my man,

You did such a good job with that poem. haha It really captured the essence of what Broke Straight Boys is all about. Well done! :thumbup1:

And May I Thank you as well Tampa for your kind words. I hope all this fame don't go to my head.:001_rolleyes:
 
Denny Bear, you did a great job with the poetry, As a new member to Broke Straight Boys, I enjoyed your work. You are good.

Many thanks gaymusic, and everyone else who commented. I am just glad to hear that folks enjoyed it.:001_rolleyes:
 
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