If you could be the director for a day......?

[larkster]

Yes please tell me how. Write me a mini-script, that a director really could execute. Need to read one of your scripts Larkster!

After your lesson #1 My script now would start something like: two boys come home. they rented a porn movie. they hang their coats. One puts the porn DVD in the player and switches on the TV. The other boy pours Wodka in waiting glasses. It seems if they live there. They talk about the tits the girls in the movie have. Chad asks: "are you hard yet?" You hear the models on DVD sigh... Kodi grabs Chad's cock. No he says: "Not yet..."

Must I go on? How am I doing. Any advice Larkster?

You are doing fine. Not very original,(Maybe you can have Kodi's little brother, Mitch spying on them to add an extra level.) but it works for me just the way you put it down. The secret to a successful scene is surprise and conflict. Is Kodi willing or does he resist and have to be seduced? Does the spy get invited into a three way? Maybe the younger bro has a sleepover friend. Maybe an even older brother, Connor or Colin comes home horny from a bad date and catches them, but is horny and ends up forcing them to service him. Again, none of this is original. But it all works to get sex scenes. Incest is always a hot fantasy. Now, what if Mitch surprisingly ends up fucking his half drunk and resistant big brother (Connor or Colin) with the help of the other guys holding him down for revenge, and surprise big bro likes it? Conflict and surprise. Now you've got my scene, clever guy.

 

[rrhill]

"The secret to a successful scene is surprise and conflict."

Ooh... so Chad and partner, can kidnap Clay away from behind his camera! Flip him on the bed and have all the fun in the world with him. No jury would convict 'm!

 

[tampa24]

. The question in that case would be, can I beat the hand of my master?

You want to beat the what of your master Robert? haha

 

[larkster]

"The secret to a successful scene is surprise and conflict."

Ooh... so Chad and partner, can kidnap Clay away from behind his camera! Flip him on the bed and have all the fun in the world with him. No jury would convict 'm!

That would be a surprise, but I doubt Clay would resist so no real conflict. And if you think about it, there wouldn't be any scene.

 

[rrhill]

Think Gone With the Wind

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Drama: A war hardened soldier teams up with a kind hearted prostitute to find the true meaning of love.

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[rrhill]

Or a bit more like this? Not a real story, but examples for some more passion on the Futon.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=brQm1n55ew4&feature=related

 

[JLipps4u]

So, it seems we have two distinct scenarios trying to evolve. One scenario seems to be calling for movie type script. Certainly longer, but if edited correctly, could be made into several episodes. The other scenario requires no script, just a good set up: the right models, the right set, and certainly better videography and editing, than we normally get in episodes. I think Chad, you were asking more for people's ideas on the second scenario, or am i wrong?

 

[BSB Jason]

I like the idea of an orgy, but for me, I agree with Larkster and would make it a "fourgy," with the same guys he mentioned and at least two videographers. I would set my scene on a private beach, accessible from a cozy beach house, nestled in a plethora of tropical flora. The camera would focus on two young boys, Chad and Kodi, running out of the water, naked, and suddenly stopping on the beach to kiss, passionately! After a few moments, their lips would part and they would continue toward the house to an open, outdoor shower. Chad turns it on and looks lovingly at Kodi and starts kissing him again, moving his lips ever so slowly all the way down to Kodi's hardened dick and begins sucking it, licking it and deep throating it, making Kodi moan loudly!

The second camera then zooms in on two young men, Collin and Bobby, in a Jeep. They are private security guards patrolling the beach. Collin drives as Bobby uses his binoculars to look for intruders. Suddenly, Bobby spies Chad and Kodi under the shower. He tells Collin to stop the jeep and hands him the binoculars. Collin
rubs his crotch and tells Bobby to get down. They both quietly walk toward the spot where the two boys are
sucking each other off. They stand close by and watch. Getting hornier, they take out their dicks from their
tight fitting uniform shorts and begin to jerk off. Meanwhile, Chad notices the two men, and before they can
put their dicks away and leave, Chad and Kodi invite the two guards to come in for some real fun.

Collin and Bobby accept and go in the house with their naked new buddies. From here I defer to larksters' setting and all the horny action for the rest of the scene.

Sorry, guys and gals! I know this isn't what we're used to seeing on Broke Straight Boys, but, what can I say, I'm a romantic who loves a good story!

hahaha no that isnt what you typically see on Broke Straight Boys ... but then again your the director, its what you want! There is some intense creativity here... kudos to you sir

Jason

 

[larkster]

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Drama: A war hardened soldier teams up with a kind hearted prostitute to find the true meaning of love.

In the process they have mad passionate sex. By the end of the movie they kiss and have some serious afterplay. Ending up winning the admiration of their manager Clay, living happily ever after.[/SIZE][SIZE=+2]
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Robert, you have fallen into the trap again. An admittedly romantic scene, but you are making a sex film. Too much story to provide much sex. What would he being "war hardened" have to do with anything? What would the prostitute being "kind hearted" give us? Did the soldier lose his dick in the war, and the prostitute teach him to take a dick up the ass to enjoy some form of sex again? Maybe the soldier has a war buddy, and the prostitute teaches him to fuck his dickless friend to help him out even though they were both straight. Now that has possibilities. The mind boggles at all the possibilities.

 

[samm4545]

If I were director for a day, I would pick two models, Connor, Bobby and Cliff and do a dating in the dark scene. First I would meet with both actors, separately, detailing what is expected from them in this scene:

1. No talking (laughing etc...),
2. open mindedness

Obviously the cameras would have to be fitted with night vision. Bobby would already be in the room, seated in close proximity to the bed. Cliff would be the first to enter, he would feel his way to the bed. Once here he would sit on the edge of the bed. Moments later, Connor would enter (Area outside of the room would have to be dark as well), feeling for the bed, then for Cliff. Cliff would then begin to touch Connor in a manly way, all over. He would then begin to undress Connor. Once Connor is undressed and hard, Cliff would stand up, and guide Connor to do the same thing (rub and undress him). Once undressed, Cliff would guide Connor down to his dick, instructing (by his actions not voice) him and guiding him on how to suck him. Cliff would then lay on the bed with Connor between his legs. Cliff will then guide Connor's free hand to Cliffs lubed asshole. Connor would then use his index finger to slowly penetrate Cliff, while Connor continues to suck him off. I have a feeling that Cliff will like it and get close to cumming quickly, so he pulls Connors head off of his dick, and trades places with Connor. Cliff lays Connor down on his back, puts his legs in the air and begins to lick Connor from Balls to Asshole. Cliff will then begin to penetrate Connors ass with a lubed finder while stroking Connor's dick. once ready, Cliff leaves Connor on his back places a pillow under Connor's lower back and puts a condom on. He then lubes the shit out of his dick, and prepares to penetrate Connor. SLOWLY. Once in he lets Connor settle, eventually picking up the pace. They would do side position, missionary, doggy, and standing. I'm not quite sure about the height difference between Connor and Cliff, but Cliff seems much bigger and taller, so Cliff guides Connor to the wall besides the bed and lifts Connor up, back against the wall, his arms under his legs and lowers him down on Cliffs dick. By this time, Bobby his horned up, and jacking (camera periodically cuts to him first rubbing dick through clothes, then taking it out through pants and jacking). Bobby feels his way over to where Cliff and Connor are, bends down between Cliff's legs and begins to suck and lick Cliffs balls as he fucks Connor. Moments later, Cliff lets Connor "off of the hook" so to speak. Sensing this Bobby (by this time has gotten naked and has lubed his hole, replaces Cliffs condom, and backs his ass onto Cliffs dick with his hands on the wall. Cliff eases into him. By this time cliff has Connor by the dick and proceeds to stroke him while Bobby begins ramming his own ass into Cliff's dick. That goes on for a few minutes, and then bobby lays faces first on the bed, while Connor mounts him. During this time, Cliff changes out condoms again....allowing Connor to get into fucking Bobby. Once they sense that Cliff is back on the bed, Bobby and Connor turn on their side and Connor continues to fuck Bobby. While doing so, Cliff slides in behind Connor and allows Connor to thrust his way back onto Cliffs dick while still fucking Bobby. Once inside of Connor, Cliff relaxes, while Connor does the work fucking him and Bobby.......Once close, Connor pushes Bobby off of his dick While Cliff is still fucking him, Bobby then proceeds to suck the cum out of Connor's dick while he's getting fucked by Cliff.....once Connor cums, Cliff pulls out, stands above the faces of both Connor and Bobby and jacks his load onto their bodies. Once everyone has cum, are are reflecting on what the hell just happened, the lights come on....and everyone is away of who they other people are. I would then interview them to find out how this shoot was different from any of their other shoots. I would also want to know if anyone had an idea of who else was partnered with them......stuff like that. THE END.....(Obviously a rough draft, needs refinement but you all get the idea.....)

 

[Beth]

If I were director for a day, I would pick two models, Connor, Bobby and Cliff and do a dating in the dark scene. First I would meet with both actors, separately, detailing what is expected from them in this scene:

1. No talking (laughing etc...),
2. open mindedness

Obviously the cameras would have to be fitted with night vision. Bobby would already be in the room, seated in close proximity to the bed. Cliff would be the first to enter, he would feel his way to the bed. Once here he would sit on the edge of the bed. Moments later, Connor would enter (Area outside of the room would have to be dark as well), feeling for the bed, then for Cliff. Cliff would then begin to touch Connor in a manly way, all over. He would then begin to undress Connor. Once Connor is undressed and hard, Cliff would stand up, and guide Connor to do the same thing (rub and undress him). Once undressed, Cliff would guide Connor down to his dick, instructing (by his actions not voice) him and guiding him on how to suck him. Cliff would then lay on the bed with Connor between his legs. Cliff will then guide Connor's free hand to Cliffs lubed asshole. Connor would then use his index finger to slowly penetrate Cliff, while Connor continues to suck him off. I have a feeling that Cliff will like it and get close to cumming quickly, so he pulls Connors head off of his dick, and trades places with Connor. Cliff lays Connor down on his back, puts his legs in the air and begins to lick Connor from Balls to Asshole. Cliff will then begin to penetrate Connors ass with a lubed finder while stroking Connor's dick. once ready, Cliff leaves Connor on his back places a pillow under Connor's lower back and puts a condom on. He then lubes the shit out of his dick, and prepares to penetrate Connor. SLOWLY. Once in he lets Connor settle, eventually picking up the pace. They would do side position, missionary, doggy, and standing. I'm not quite sure about the height difference between Connor and Cliff, but Cliff seems much bigger and taller, so Cliff guides Connor to the wall besides the bed and lifts Connor up, back against the wall, his arms under his legs and lowers him down on Cliffs dick. By this time, Bobby his horned up, and jacking (camera periodically cuts to him first rubbing dick through clothes, then taking it out through pants and jacking). Bobby feels his way over to where Cliff and Connor are, bends down between Cliff's legs and begins to suck and lick Cliffs balls as he fucks Connor. Moments later, Cliff lets Connor "off of the hook" so to speak. Sensing this Bobby (by this time has gotten naked and has lubed his hole, replaces Cliffs condom, and backs his ass onto Cliffs dick with his hands on the wall. Cliff eases into him. By this time cliff has Connor by the dick and proceeds to stroke him while Bobby begins ramming his own ass into Cliff's dick. That goes on for a few minutes, and then bobby lays faces first on the bed, while Connor mounts him. During this time, Cliff changes out condoms again....allowing Connor to get into fucking Bobby. Once they sense that Cliff is back on the bed, Bobby and Connor turn on their side and Connor continues to fuck Bobby. While doing so, Cliff slides in behind Connor and allows Connor to thrust his way back onto Cliffs dick while still fucking Bobby. Once inside of Connor, Cliff relaxes, while Connor does the work fucking him and Bobby.......Once close, Connor pushes Bobby off of his dick While Cliff is still fucking him, Bobby then proceeds to suck the cum out of Connor's dick while he's getting fucked by Cliff.....once Connor cums, Cliff pulls out, stands above the faces of both Connor and Bobby and jacks his load onto their bodies. Once everyone has cum, are are reflecting on what the hell just happened, the lights come on....and everyone is away of who they other people are. I would then interview them to find out how this shoot was different from any of their other shoots. I would also want to know if anyone had an idea of who else was partnered with them......stuff like that. THE END.....(Obviously a rough draft, needs refinement but you all get the idea.....)

Oh yeah, I like this idea! Roll cameras Clay...the boys have some action they want you to film!

 

[JLipps4u]

Hmmmm. I actually like the idea,except for the use of Cliff, or Connor, or that matter. I'd chANge those two for Scott and Chad! Yes, Bobby, Scott and CHAD! Arouses me just to think about it.

 

[samm4545]

LOL...JLipps4u, I guess we all have our guys. I've never been with a guy that identifies as gay, so the idea of Cliff is a turn on and the type of guy I like and have been with.

 

[angelone]

Two teams playing football. Losers get fucked. Winners have gang-bang finale. San Francisco 69ers vs Detroit Hoes playing for Broke Straight Boys Championship. Real he-man action, sweat, blood, rough & guts clash of minds and bodies. Swearing, cussing and spitting commotion on-field and on-bench drama. Tense, nerve-wracking suspense as game comes too close to call, it could go either way for either team. Last minute Hail Mary throw wins the game. Both teams blooded but unbowed. Loser unstrap their pants, waiting for insertion....

 

[Beth]

Two teams playing football. Losers get fucked. Winners have gang-bang finale. San Francisco 69ers vs Detroit Hoes playing for Broke Straight Boys Championship. Real he-man action, sweat, blood, rough & guts clash of minds and bodies. Swearing, cussing and spitting commotion on-field and on-bench drama. Tense, nerve-wracking suspense as game comes too close to call, it could go either way for either team. Last minute Hail Mary throw wins the game. Both teams blooded but unbowed. Loser unstrap their pants, waiting for insertion....

This would be perfect, especially since football just wrapped up. I volunteer to be a referee; I would be happy to stand with those guys and just blow...my wistle, of course!