While there were some hot aspects to this scene, I must admit overall I found it completely annoying due to one simple fact: The editing or/and camera work was inexcusable, especially towards the end. The climax to any sex scene is, well, during and right after the guy(s) climax! In this scene, after the doctor shot his load over the patient’s face, considering its ending the viewer can reasonably assume the patient immediately begins sucking and licking up the doctor’s still-hard/cum-coated cock with his mouth and tongue. Did they show us this in great detail including close-ups as they should have?
NO!!!!!!!
Instead, they choose to pan over and then zoom in on the drill sergeant taking FOREVER to jack off, and then finally releasing his load onto the patient’s lower back. All which has been seen thousands of times before...nothing special about it at all. All while we are completely MISSING what’s going on with the doctor and patient, who as I mentioned is sure to be enjoying the doctor’s still erect cock and cum with his mouth and tongue.
By the time the camera finally meanders its way back to the doctor and patient, you catch a long-shot glimpse of the patient finishing up what has been going on the entire time the drill sergeant was taking FOREVER to finish up: ending the sucking of our doctor’s by now completely limp and totally spent penis for 2-3 seconds before the camera completely fades onto the patient himself cumming on the exam table by jacking himself off.
TOTAL wasted opportunity for what could have been a very memorable, and hot climax as the doctor gives the patient a nice big facial, and the patient indulges himself by sucking him some more and cleaning up his cock: much like Rabib did with Daxter in one of my top ten favorite
Broke Straight Boys scenes from long ago.
It was also a wasted opportunity when the drill sergeant was visibly erect the entire time he was still clothed. But instead of pulling his fully erect out of his cammies 19 minutes into the scene, it would have been so much hotter if he would have been told he needed to get naked too...even before anyone started doing anything to him sexually. Now wouldn’t that have been hot to watch him strip down naked, only to reveal his fully erect penis as he pulls down his cammies and underwear and steps out of them?
A spontaneous erection should never be wasted in a scene, it should be exploited in order to enhance it!
If not for these issues, the scene could have been hot. But I guess it just helps enforce my firm belief that 3ways and orgies should only be done in moderation in porn. It’s impossible to catch all the action the viewers want to see, and invariably the camera is going to miss what we most want to see and instead concentrate on what we least want to see. It’s just too hard to please everyone when there are too many people in a scene. With my complaints about the focus being too much on the drill sergeant jacking off and finally cumming onto the patient’s lower back (making us completely miss the cum-eating action with the patient and doctor), I’m sure there are those who would have complained if it would have ended the way I wish it did, and lamented that we missed the drill sergeant’s cum shot. (Although perhaps if there were two cameras filming the scene instead of just one, and some skillful editing, we could have been treated to both!)
Also, as a side note, it seemed to me that the scene wasn’t lit very well. The whole scene appeared a little dark, shadowy, and dreary. Like there were a few light bulbs burned out in the exam room or something.
Just some constructive criticism, I would normally not complain so much about one specific scene but MAN we don’t get to see any cum eating very often. And once we are finally treated to some, it only shows a little bit as it’s ending on a completely spent, limp dick from afar.
Abe
Anyway, it is just fantasy porn for me... I just get a little concerned for the models when they sound like they are going to loose their cookies in the middle of a BJ.
